Your piece is well thought out and has some wonderful consistancy in your proportion. The placement of the right foot is a bit awkward but it could be due to the shine effects placed upon your PVC items.
I think your vision is totally clear which may or may not be a bias on my part (since I know you). However I will say in defense, that your style is very well defined which I think is important in setting yourself apart from the many many pinup illustration artists. I think that your technique is getting cleaner as well as the style in which you color. Im really liking the simulation of streaks on the model's hair.
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St. Francis said,
“A man who uses his hands is a laborer. One who uses his hands and mind is a craftsman. He who uses his hands, and his mind, and his heart is an artist.”
I think that knowing an artist's overall progress can help me in giving critique that is helpful because I know the area they are trying to work on and what tricks they already know. Still, I guess it could also bias me too because sometimes we need a newbie or outsider's perspective too.
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"If all the net is a stage, then I think I would be the traveling act that performs to small groups but occasionally ends up in dive bars"
I think your vision is totally clear which may or may not be a bias on my part (since I know you). However I will say in defense, that your style is very well defined which I think is important in setting yourself apart from the many many pinup illustration artists. I think that your technique is getting cleaner as well as the style in which you color. Im really liking the simulation of streaks on the model's hair.